BURNSTONE - Amber.....washes up from the ocean....resin.....different. Thank you...
Blind parents interacting...Gravis is there.....little baby dragon lands on Mom or Dad.....at this point, Gravis' face shield breaks and he is given sight.....little dragon has eyes as well.....it looks at Gravis and convinces g to leave it on his parent even though G sees that it is causing the birth of disease in G's parents.....Gravis' parents somehow are gone (physically or mentally/emotionally)...He has eyes now,unlike any of his kind......he has chosen his solitude...he is alone......Alt::: he picks the Dragon off of his mom but place it back on her so quietly that she/he is unaware....the Dragon brings conflict and violence to parents.......Gravis leaves/runs away quietly to black space..growing up alone until the first planet construction....boy in black tower is Gravis' true self who remained alive when he "Left himself" and parents upon the conflict/disease dragon sequence. Gravis embraced eyesight and fear as his foundation.........NEGATION OF THE NEGATION: self loathing through fear and inaction.....
PROGRESSION I: Sequence of failed planet constructions:Gravis kills and causes death of several new worlds as he learns(Through mistakes with consquences) how to put the peices of planets together as well as moving them into correct solar placement......all this done in society of blind planet constructors who came from White universe to aid Gravis.....after the first couple of screw ups.....all the planets pieces just fly at him from the sun and he instinctively does the bar minimum necessary manuevers to piece it all together into Sphere.....After several deaths of creatures.........He finally gets it right and doesn't rush it or put the planet too close to the sun:::: Sordei brings the staff and starts the planet's birth sequence and starts the dominoe effect that is the Staff Vein Corruption. Now we begin the sequence towards open war on the white universe through series of black creatures, Cal's rescue,and Gravis' discovery of the Child in the Black tower/shiny Obilisk thing.
Gravis has been told and taught about the king, but he believes He is the blind one's illusion: Only he has eyes.Only he can see what is before him and nothing else.......he Knows.....they Believe what they are given to see. Gravis doesn't know what he wants but wants to meet this King for he doubts that what his eyes can see is all that is reality........he discovers Cal's plot and he and the boy set out to find their place in this conflict that is unfolded before them.........Gravis needs the child to function in the brightness of the white universe for it is too bright there for Gravis to see anything....
Break -
Ego, mind and soul in the darkest cave. Ego - no arms or legs.....speak and hear and see
Soul - legs but no arms....speak and hear but blind
Mind - arms but no legs.....speak and see but deaf
Big mean Dog - Conscious mind
Little nice Dog - Sub-conscious mind
The group longs and journeys tirelessly to get out of the dark.....
They've been in a canyon in a gigantic cave....
Crack in the ocean floor....
Drowned by the flood....
Only one survives to the surface....The One
Through the sea of music....
To the surface the sun, the place of life.
Break -
11/24/10
What if this guy who writes movies/screenplays/t.v shows suddenly realizes that his creative output up until this point has really amounted to nothing more than meaningless eye candy for large numbers of people. He doesn't want to be remembered as this creator of "junk'...he wants to move poeple....to help them....to give them a new perspective on life and how they live........he wants to create art that is meaningful.....not just bubble gum
What does he really want? Character Arc I: Beg. : Wants fun and creativity.....End: wants purpose/meaning
Arc II :Wants affirmation of others.....End:wants self acceptance/peace.
Arc III : Wants to prove to his parents/self that he made something of his life.......End: Realizes somehow that life is about being, not about becoming someone.
Arc IV : Wants to remain in his childhood and not grow up...End: realizes that childlikeness is a choice for adults who are responsible citizens.
Arc V :Wants to destroy the minds of his audience......End: realizes that his own internal dysfunction is a result of his response to his life, not just a consequence of the media he consumed as an american.
Arc VI :Wants to get paid to write whatever.....End:discovers that being true to who he is may not pay well but allows him to sleep at night(cheesy?)
Break -
what's the difference between sight with eyes and innervision that is given from a distant source...the limitation is only for the one with eyes in that the vision of the giver is not there......the limitation for the onewith inner vision is that of time.......the sight is only there for a period of time.........the curse being constant sight with no revelation......
Scene showing revelation needs to be more significant than the scene showing P. construction....dream is real
BOOKS:
Godel, Escher Bach The eternal Golden Braid By I'll post his name later
Story By Robert McKee
His Family By I forgot
The Stuff White People Like-scary and hilarious
